科院2012年写作II第一讲讲义

I. Grammar

In my opinion, the disadvantages of capital punishment are outweigh its advantages for the following reasons.

2. Self-confidence means believe oneself.

3. those people is just putting into prison.

7. I believe capital punishment is need in our society.

8. You can always meet someone have no confidence.

9. Heard the sounds from the door, mother waken up at…

10. Looked me. She was smiled at me

11. 11. So my life in the school is very busy.

12. As the medical and economical developing in China, the aging problem become more and more serious.

13. They are some buyers walk along the street

14. The old man become more and more

15. I think there are many things cause this phenomenon.

16. Second, old people also is a burden to young people when they become older and older.

17. If we try our best to do it, you will succeed.

18. There are too many people lose their job.

19. Nowadays, with the step of life become fast, many people regard children as their burden.

20. When talked about job-hopping, most people will list many disadvantages of it.

21. With more and more college students graduate, more and more job problems come out.

22.The main function of cell phone for us is keep touch with our family and friends.

23. There are also some private universities are well known to people.

24. I think there are a lot of reasons cause day dream.

25. Go into business is a common phenomenon.

26. There are more and more people hope they will be rich.

27. The life in college is more relaxed and less study burden than it in middle school.

28. The one-child policy make babies less and less.

II. Tense

1. Maybe sometimes they did some bad things, but I’m sure they are forced to do these.

2. When somebody was thinking without any words, his friend may ask what he was doing.

3. Even if they were told that smoking did harm to health, they would still like to try smoking.

III. Run-on sentences

1. But the weather were very bad, it rains heavily.

2. Everything is so good, I can get everything what I want.

3. He is a very kind man, he didn’t scold me.

4. Children serve as a link between parents, they are the fruit of love, having children is necessary.

5. However, reading is indeed beneficial to us, we are encouraged to spend more spare time on reading. IV. SF

1. Because I am very lonely.

2. In the cool fall.

3. As the medical and economical developing in China, the aging problem become more and more serious.

4. As the development of economy

5. If someone only notice his or homework.

6.I have many friend. Such as Lucy and Lily.